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Tails was in his lab like he usually is, working on one of machines. He had been trying to fix this one for a week and it still wasn't working. But he was determined to fix it no matter what. "I'll fix you if it's the last thing I do." He said.

After about two more hours of working, he decided to take a break. He went into the kitchen and made a snack. A sandwich, chips, and a mint ice cream milkshake. He looked out his window and saw that his mailbox had mail in it.

He finished his snack and went outside. The sun was shining and it was a beautiful day. He reached into his mailbox and sorted through the mail. "Bill, bill, junk, postcard, Hmm?" It was a letter from the doctor. "It must be my test results."

A few weeks ago , Tails had done some blood tests. The doctor said the results would be mailed to him. He went inside and opened the letter. He was horrified at what he read.

Dear Mr. Prower,

We have finished the results of your blood tests. We regret to inform you that you have an inoperable brain tumor, that cannot  be removed. It is our sad duty to inform you that by the time you get this, you will have about a week to live.

Sincerley,
Dr. Quacksalot
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Tails finds out he is dying and makes a list of things to do before he dies. This is my most popular story on FF.net and I'm hoping it will be here.
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:iconprowerfoxboy:
the thing at the top of Tails's to-do-be-fore-death list is: invent a machine to heal/sustain him, because he is smart enough to do that... right? :iconbegplz: :iconiloveyouplz:
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~HedgieLuver Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i luv the doctor's name lol
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:iconxsonicboomx:
I read all the chapters......ITS AWSOME!!!!!!
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:iconace-of-spades-666:
not a bad story. in my opinion its a bit short. i like stories that have some length to them. if ur look in for ideas in the next chapter have tails go visit fiona and him tell her the bad news. nice job
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:iconsonatchet182:
I already finised this story. The later chapters are longer.
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:iconace-of-spades-666:
o ok. ill check em out later
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:iconmilesprower99:
*milesprower99 Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
a brain tumor? really? you couldn't kill him off using an experiment or have him be tortured to death or die a horrible and painful death? A BRAIN TUMOR?!? its still a good story. really good!
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:iconsonatchet182:
Don't you think that other stuff would be knid of cruel to do to Tails? And besides, if I did that, he wouldn't be able to make his list.
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*milesprower99 Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
go and read the first seven chapters of my first book called Sonic Hedgehog: Orb of Chaos. Its the first in a series that i'm writing. i wirte these books realistically so some people may think that what i do to my characters might be cruel. i think that because Tails is a scientist of sorts and is always tinkering with stuff that it would've been more apropiate to have die slowly due to a failed experiment. the brain tumor is a great thought but i think you need to include as to why Tails got it in the first place. just saying this as a fellow author.
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:iconsonatchet182:
Well, if you read the whole story, he never had a tumor to begin with. Since I had planned that from the beggining, I saw no need to explain how he got it.
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